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Silence and Pain Within Me by ~bleedingmona:iconbleedingmona:





Walking up the steps to the beam
Silence and Pain within me
Standing on the beam
I tie the rope to the bar above
The noose sways back and forth in front of me
I catch it in my hand, Place it over my head
I take a step off the edge
Oop's now i'm dead!!
©2005-2009 ~bleedingmona
:iconbleedingmona:

Author's Comments

i had just watched a movie called hangmans curse before i wrote this poem nd basically it was the movie tht triggered of the idea nd inspiration of the poem.

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:iconxailon:
sounds fun i want a go!

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Im lost and can't be found

"what happend to my angel?"

TORN
:iconbleedingmona:
nah its not much fun the game ends pretty quickly im afraid so no fun there, so u wouldnt really wanna go -shakes hair-

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"in the evening i've got to roam can't sleep in this city of neon and chrome"
:iconbleedingmona:
*head

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"in the evening i've got to roam can't sleep in this city of neon and chrome"
:icontickandswisted:
OOOOH! I think I've seen that movie, one movie I have seen is SAW. My god it rocks socks.
:iconxailon:
hah. you shock ur hair sorry im ststing the ovbious. duh shut the fuck up slug you fucking tard oh im doind it again talking to myself that is god when will this end *dies*

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Im lost and can't be found

"what happend to my angel?"

TORN
:iconbleedingmona:
noooooooooo dnt die ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooooo please dont die :p rods: :cries:

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"in the evening i've got to roam can't sleep in this city of neon and chrome"
:iconxailon:
aaahhhh. maybe i won't for now... but anyways hey how ya doing? whats up?

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Im lost and can't be found

"what happend to my angel?"

TORN
:iconxailon:
:P hah licked u back

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Im lost and can't be found

"what happend to my angel?"

TORN
:iconcarriedmycross:
I really love how you've captured the thoughts of someone's suicide. I must be honest though; I did not like the ending. It can either be sad or happy but not both.

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God Bless You

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